Melonia take 2

So I'm sitting around, wanting to draw something but not specifically work on my art project, when I just decided to draw my character from PSO2 again.  This time with a reference and, you know, some reliable technique.  I am sure you agree this one is far better

In case you forgot (I don't mind if you did!) here's the original from 10 months ago. Melonia drawing

Art and character idea belongs to me.